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The Strings of My reality by ~raevenstear:iconraevenstear:



Clip the strings to my reality
They were simply the thin threads
To which my sanity was clinging
Watch it all fall away
Delicious and slow... like death

Drinking wine from a broken glass
Taste the blood that mixes within
Feel the sweet decay begin
Rotting from the inside-out
My heart will be the first to go


Upside-down faces
Reflected in a cracked mirror
But that\'s just my mind
The blood that\'s flowing from my eyes
Isn\'t really there


Would you stop laughing?
But you\'re not really there
Why are you screaming?
Did I cut you too deep?
My dead hand upon your face


I will visit my own grave
I will sit for hours and stare
For the madmans dreams
Are all my own
Let me take you to hell with me


Where\'s that crying child?
But that\'s just me
I\'d laugh for years if I only could
You might think I\'m crazy
I\'m not crazy... just ask the voices that tell me to kill you


Would you like to visit my grave?
Perhaps leave me a rose
And pretend that you knew me
When you clipped the strings
To my reality
©2003-2009 ~raevenstear
:iconraevenstear:

Author's Comments

They're coming to take me away, haha, they're coming to take me away... to the funny farm... *cough* AHEM! This was written just this afternoon while I was bathing in the joys of my deliciously morbid mood.

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:iconsummerglow:
I love this. +fav!! This is really amazing, the idea was great, the way it was written was better. It's awesome.

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"All matter is merely energy condensed to a slow vibration, we are all one consciousness experiencing itself subjectively, there's no such thing as death, life is only a dream and we are the imagination of ourselves."
:iconbrinx-:
Some excellent ideas :) (Smile)
:iconjo-kr:
A very nice poem, 5th stanza particularly, and a nice return to the start of the poem. A fav for sure

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And yet who can say how soon it may all vanish from our lives?

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June 21, 2003

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